Wednesday, June 13, 2012

On The Night Of Horror

Something brushed up against my foot and my surprise turned to horror as I looked down and saw that I was in a haunted house with Tom. Tom, the baby, was going near a room. I quickly held Tom’s shoulders and then I told Mosa, my friend, “I’m scared!” He replied back “I am too!”. We started screaming, “HELP, HELP, HELP” but no one replied. When I looked down, Tom wasn't there. I got scared. I saw him in the passage, walking. I told Mosa to get him.

I hear some noise coming from upstairs. I sneaked upstairs to see what was going on and I heard someone talking on a phone. I peeked and saw him and he was tall. His name was Joe and he had bushy hair.

As I went down I heard the door open by itself. I ran out with Mosa but Tom got lost. We did not care for the baby. I hid at the back of the bushes because I saw someone going in a car and I did not know where I was. I was terrified and scared.

When I was walking down the street some strange person said to me “Come here boy, I’ll give you a ride home.” I was talking to Mosa about the baby about what will we say to our mum. Mosa said, "We should tell her that we lost him." I asked, “Will it work?” I was feeling sad.

I knew we could not solve the problem. Everyday we went to the haunted house and one day the door opened by itself. Tom came out and I ran up to him and give him a big hug.


  1. Hi Mohammed,
    This is a very scary story you have written but I really enjoyed it. I like to read scary stories, do you? I liked the end when they found the baby but if I was put in that situation, I would go back and find the baby. Anyway, Keep Up The Great Work!


  2. Hey Mohamed I really liked your scary story. Scary stories is a lot of fun to read, but it is even better if you watch it. I look forward to more interesting stories. Keep it up.


    1. Thank you uili love your comment that you have done on my blog post.

  3. Absolutely creepy and exiting too but one thing though, who's tom. Anyway who cares your really a good writer.


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